Peer feedback.

Despite being absent, from my groups blog I've learnt that we were given feedback by other members of our class last Wednesday 5th January. These are the comments that were made;

'Long Shot- too lengthy (untitled 1-10-1)'

'Include Joe in a bit'
'Good feel to piece'
'Long black out at 46 seconds (1-11-1)'
'Promoting violence and strange product placement'

Due to the fact our music video is not completed yet, most of the queries are easily answered (such as the black-out, including Joe more frequently and the long-shot). We haven't added all our music video and hopefully, taking the comments on-board our video will solve all these problems. I feel, despite this, that our video suits the song we have chosen and even, the genre attached to it. Our video speaks a hard life faced by some and this is generally a topic tackled by rappers.